August 30, 2009

The Anatomy of a Story

Author: Yoav - Categories: world lit, writing - Tags: , , , , , , , ,

I feel that I’m on some sort of a quest. I could have published a novel or poetry collection years ago, but in a sense, I feel that would only limit me, because like in The Serpent, to publish something means that you are giving up on what it could have been.  I know that Walt Whitman changed ‘Leaves of Grass’ repeatedly and there are writers and poets that obsessively work on their creation even after it’s finished but still this is not the point.

John Truby’s The Anatomy of a Story is the first book that made me feel like I am a true story teller and that I can be a master storyteller no matter which vessel I use to tell my tale. The book pinpoints principals that one might say are driven from the world of script-writing such as ‘premise’ but are still true to everyone and anyone who tells a story.

Truby is very encouraging and covers everything: structure, characters, moral argument (which you probably know I think is highly important), scene, dialogue, symbols, and plot. He also gives key points that need to be defined like “the most important step in creating your hero, as well as all other characters is to connect and compare each to the other”. This is golden advice because our characters are sometimes just a state of mind (for instance we create a character to represent generosity or madness) but sometimes you want them to be contradictory, as in real life, where people are much more complicated and surprising. I highly recommend this book as it is written by an expert and it explains storytelling on a large scale and multiple genres. No wonder people see it as ‘The Bible of Telling Stories’.

February 17, 2009

Theophrastus

Author: Yoav - Categories: poetry, prose, world lit, writing - Tags: , , ,

Today we are going to talk about one of the first studies of human behavior. The book is called the Characters and its author, Theophrastus, is a true scholar, and he continued Aristotle’s work in some ways. This book tries to divide and categorize human nature and behavior, or as Wikipedia says:

 

“The work contains thirty brief, vigorous and trenchant outlines of moral types, which form a most valuable picture of the life of his time, and in fact of human nature in general. They are the first recorded attempt at systematic character writing. The book has been regarded by some as an independent work; others incline to the view that the sketches were written from time to time by Theophrastus, and collected and edited after his death; others, again, regard the Characters as part of a larger systematic work, but the style of the book is against this. Theophrastus has found many imitators in this kind of writing, notably Joseph Hall (1608), Sir Thomas Overbury (1614–16), Bishop Earle (1628) and Jean de La Bruyère (1688), who also translated the Characters. George Eliot also took inspiration from Theophrastus’ Characters, most notably in her book of caricatures, Impressions of Theophrastus. Writing the “character sketch” as a scholastic exercise also originated in Theophrastus’s typology.”  

 

The aspect that I find astonishing is the fact that there is only one female character in this book, and the fact that he is writing years before Freud, that cheapskates poo like goats. Here is one of his portraits:

           

The Coward
by Theophrastus

             

“Cowardice would seem to be, in fact, a shrinking of the soul through fear.

The Coward is one who, on a voyage, will protest that the promontories are privateers; and, if a high sea gets up, will ask if there is anyone on board who has not been initiated. He will put up his head and ask the steersman if he is halfway, and what he thinks of the face of the heavens; remarking to the person sitting next him that a certain dream makes him feel uneasy; and he will take off his tunic and give it to his slave; or he will beg them to put him ashore.

            On land also, when he is campaigning, he will call to him those who are going out to the rescue, and bid them come and stand by him and look about them first; saying that it is hard to make out which is the enemy. Hearing shouts and seeing men falling, he will remark to those who stand by him that he has forgotten in his haste to bring his sword, and will run to the tent; where, having sent his slave out to reconnoiter the position of the enemy, he will hide the sword under his pillow; and then spend a long time in pretending to look for it. And seeing from the tent a wounded comrade being carried in, he will run towards him and cry “Cheer up!” He will take him into his arms and carry him; he will tend and sponge him; he will sit by him and keep the flies off his wound – in short he will do anything rather than fight with the enemy. Again, when the trumpeter has sounded the signal for battle, he will cry, as he sits in the tent, “Bother! You will not allow the man to get a wink of sleep with your perpetual bugling!” Then, covered with blood from the other’s wound, he will meet those who are returning from the fight, and announce to them, “I have run some risk to save one of 25 our fellows”; and he will bring in the men of his parish and of his tribe to see his patient, at the same time explaining to each of them that he carried him with his own hands to the tent.”

Kane and Peters, in their remarkable book Writing Prose (1958, 1964), mention that Theophrastus combines definition, description and narration and that the good writer should learn to distinguish between them. This is because they are not always combined. I think that Theophrastus’s stereotypes come from his life experience and if he wrote them as an art form they would have been more exacted, because life is the biggest test and not some fake laboratory.

            Today’s task is to create this sort of profile of a character or a type you know, and the best will be published here on a special corner.

 

Yours,

 

Yoav

 

 

February 16, 2009

Character ID

Author: Yoav - Categories: poetry, prose, world lit, writing - Tags: , ,

Without further dues, here is my character ID. It’s based on experience, and far too many blind dates.
Enjoy,
Yoav

Character ID

Name:
Sex:
Origin:
Religion:
Place of Birth (Describe in a few words):
Address (Describe in a few words):
Date of Birth:
Occupation:
What jobs did he/she have?
Education:
Does he/she have a roll model?
Family status:
Socio-economical status:
Does he/she have a car? Which car?
What Does he/she has in her trunk?
Number of brothers and sisters:
How good is the relationship between them?
Link with the parents:
Is he/she bereaved or suffered a loss?
What profound change did he/she have in her life?
What is the most awkward experience that he/she ever passed?
Who is her health/medical condition?
What would he/she change in her body if he/she could?
Did he/she go to college\served in the army?
Does he/she have any nasty habits?
Who would he/she call at four o’clock in the morning?
Who would he/she slap if he/she could?
What is the last insult that he/she suffered?
What secrete would he/she tell no one?
Who would he/she kiss if he/she had the chance?
What was the last compliment that he/she received?
When did he/she have her first love? With who?
What was her last love story?
What present would he/she like to get?
What did he/she dream last night?
What would he/she buy if he/she would have won the lottery?
What is the biggest risk he/she took?
What is he/she reading right now?
Does he/she like to read?
What is her musical taste?
What’s in the wallet/purse?
What’s in her bag?
What’s in her bed side drawer?
What is he/she scared of?
What does he/she regret?
What did he/she dream of when he/she was a small child?
What is her biggest success? How did it affect her?
What is the most visible thing in the character?
Is he/she superstitious? In what way?
What is her favorite food?
What’s in her Fridge right now?
What is the weirdest thing he/she lost on the public transportation?
What is the most crucial event that he/she was late to/ missed?
When did he/she want to live?
How would he/she die?
Typical sentence of the character: